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Julie50
Julie50
Nov 06, 2007 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Our Songs

As the music of words flow from my heart, the pen dances to the music.

As it twirls and turns my thoughts are deeply portrayed into something I can see.

My heart yurns to share with others this music.

Like the song of the brook.

Or the sound of the ocean.

We all have our own music to play.

May we learn in this life our own music, and sing to the world.

May we all make harmony and beautiful music together.

As we sing our songs may we learn something and continue to grow.

Each song we sing will be special and unique.

Let us share our songs with each other.

By Julie Norton

— Julie50, Nov 06, 2007

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dbrock

18 years 7 months ago

“touche” Nice way to

"touche" Nice way to describe, "UNITY" ...i sing, it's just very off key :) Another much enjoyable read...thank you! donna
Julie50

Julie50

18 years 4 months ago

poems

Thanks for your sweet comments. Do you have any poetry on here? If so what would they be under? Julie
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Conect11

18 years 7 months ago

I like

how you began, and the positive message you send. If I had any suggestion it would be to keep ownership of your thought throughout the poem, all the way till the end. Good work! Mark W.