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jove
Member since December 15, 2009
Member for 16 years, 5 months
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Someone more than I
And there is always someone in more pain,
a hunger to which I can not relate.
Someone who's anguish, borders on insane.
Someone with so much more upon their plate.
And what right do I have to make complaint?
What horrors have I suffered on this Earth?
Empty canvas devoid of hope or paint,
a victim from the moment of Its birth.
What right have I to morn upon its grave?
What solace gathered should I end it's plight?
What false anger unfurls the flags we wave?
And what would be the point, to win its fight?
To stifle pain and anguish is my fate.
I have no more worth I have been no saint.
As someone more than I needs to be saved.
by Jove !
jove’s timeline
- December 2024
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14 SatAnniversary
15 years of membership
- December 2019
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14 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2014
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14 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- January 2012
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18 WedReceived a critique
on Someone more than I from @loved
"my maiden read Do act upon the advices rendered They are invaluable as these emanate from wiser poets" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on Someone more than I from @Race_9togo
"and welcome to Neopoet, Jove. A belated welcome, since I see that you have posted three poems already. I am sorry that I missed the others, I will read them when I can. I like this poem of yours. The cadence is good, th…" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on Someone more than I from @Candlewitch
"I have not seen you here before, so, I will say; hello and welcome to the neo poet site! If it were my poem (which it isn't) I would shorten the title to read: (More Than I) I like the premise of this piece. Nice rhyme…" -
16 Mon
- December 2011
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13 Tue
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09 Fri
- December 2010
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14 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- July 2010
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08 Thu
- February 2010
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15 MonHighest posting month
February 2010 — 9 poems
- December 2009
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17 ThuFirst critique offered
on "The mourning after" by @eliaszizou
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15 TueFirst publication
Second Thoughts
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14 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
ah! Hmm, 'nuf said .
by Jove!
Location: British Columbia, CAN
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... what can I say I can't dance. lol
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Wannabe
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The rise and fall of poetry
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" Nevermore " Forever !
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Until debt do us part
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Outhouse hero (Rubaiyat)
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Facade
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On the rocks
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