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jove
jove
Feb 20, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

" Nevermore " Forever !

  She waits upon an empty shore .She waits and cries out ," Nevermore " .She waits upon the sea most clever .She ' ll cry  " Nevermore " forever ! She wages war on empty waves ,each unfulfilled the promise made .A swift return was all she asked ,the sea found much too hard a task . Then it lied to her in spite ,underneath the pale moonlight ."Just wait here upon the shore ,and call my name out , Nevermore " ! She stands there shrouded in the mists .She stands and shrieks and shakes her fists .She stands there raging at the sea .She'll rage for all eternity . Crying  " Nevermore "  forever  ! By Jove ! 
— jove, Feb 20, 2010

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Region, Country: British Columbia, CAN

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Lovely Jove

Sorry I have not visited you lately and I want to tell you I just love this. The only thing I can say is the exclamation marks are way over and in the word she'll how would it flow with the words she will. Just a little food for thought for you my Jove and hope all is well by you. Will be back to visit you sooner netxt time. I read your challenge but my brain can only hold so much lately lol love, jove makes me move magics02 xoxox "Determination Brings Success"
jove

jove

16 years 3 months ago

Thank you very much

Take your pick, both would fit fine; although a seagull would suit the seashore ! Glad you liked this sad poem. By Jove !
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jove

16 years 3 months ago

No problemo !

I don't expect you will jump every time I post Sweetheart. I am in no hurry, and hold no expectations of you whatsoever, so no need to be sorry about anything ! lol Ya I do tend to overdo the exclamation marks a bit. We French are always running around with our fingers pointed up, exclaiming everything ! see what I mean ? lol ! ah there I go again ! and again !!! ah Ps glad you liked the poem . By Jove !