ishaq

Member since October 29, 2008

Member for 17 years, 7 months

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Nourishing a Thought Sublime

Posted Jul 15, 2010 · 15 lines · 2 critiques

Nourishing a Thought Sublime

Living in peace until the last breath

A union divine in distinct breadth.

Fortitude nourished in solitude

A matter of attitude

Unity of the souls

Not fitting into the cowls

With fat jowls

Have only deeds foul

Waking up to serenity of certitude

With the treasures of eternal beatitude

Nourishing a thought sublime

A symphony not of the mind finite.

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October 2023
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15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
October 2013
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5 years of membership
July 2010
17 Sat

Received a critique
on Nourishing a Thought Sublime from @Candlewitch
"A lovely thought. My favorite lines: Waking up to serenity of certitude With the treasures of eternal beatitude Nourishing a thought sublime A symphony not of the mind finite. Always, Cat"
17 Sat

Received a critique
on Love Unveiled from @Candlewitch
"A lovely poem. My favorite lines: Sailing with the music of currents In an ocean of love Deep my longing between birth and death Movements mine in a course spiral Always, Cat"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on Flowers Beauteous Wither from @Candlewitch
"nice to meet you. Your language use is expressive and I like the theme. My favorite lines are: jackboots on rampage Teens up against bondage Flowers beauteous wither Thorns prosper. Always, Cat"
15 Thu

Posted a poem
Nourishing a Thought Sublime
"Nourishing a Thought Sublime"
Open thread 15 lines
13 Tue

Posted a poem
Love Unveiled
"Love Unveiled"
Open thread 16 lines
06 Tue

Posted a poem
Flowers Beauteous Wither
"Flowers Beauteous Wither"
Open thread 11 lines
04 Sun

Received a critique
on Pain not on the Wane from @judyanne
"without making a comment i think it is worth another vote it reads political social and personal to me and i get more from it every time i read it love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPre…"
June 2010
22 Tue

Posted a poem
Pain not on the Wane
"                   Pain not on the wane"
Open thread 9 lines
20 Sun

Received a critique
on Shunning Ignorance Eeerie from @U K Atiyodi
"'Shunning ignorance eerie' is philosophical. Between you and I no divide--Thatvamasy. (Hindu Adwaita) To see you as my guide--to see the Almighty as guide."
20 Sun

Posted a poem
Shunning Ignorance Eeerie
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Open thread 12 lines
16 Wed

Received a critique
on Seeking the One from @xena465
"Seeking your desire and finding the right one is all we can ever ask for...nice write. Perhaps using the word one a little less may read better. Just a suggestion. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is wha…"
15 Tue

Posted a poem
Seeking the One
"Neither one thing nor the other"
Open thread 14 lines
04 Fri

Received a critique
on Embracing Ignominy from @xena465
"I love it...Great write. Just one thing I noticed in this line... In line on the tenth {tenth} ......Did you mean to repeat this word? Xena"
03 Thu

Posted a poem
Embracing Ignominy
"Passing swiftly into history"
Open thread 12 lines
March 2010
13 Sat

Received a critique
on The Endless, Not Dead from @lyz
"You are a superb writer and this poem is no exception. Wording, content etc, grand. Love to you and yours. Lyz. XX"
January 2010
22 Fri

Posted a poem
The Endless, Not Dead
"The Endless, Not Dead"
Open thread 27 lines
14 Thu

Posted a poem
A Wonder Writ Large I am
"Without Him something I am"
Open thread 6 lines
07 Thu

Posted a poem
Burning Love
"Fire underneath my soul for the One"
Open thread 7 lines
October 2009
28 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
02 Fri

Posted a poem
Dancing not an entity unmanly
"Dancing not an entity unmanly"
Open thread 16 lines
September 2009
26 Sat

Posted a poem
Renaissance of our Spirit
"Let us strive to be happy eternally"
Open thread 8 lines
October 2008
29 Wed

First publication
The Holy Wine
28 Tue

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.