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The Holy Wine

 

Falling into the silence ecstatic

Amidst streams flowing and roaring

Tuning in to the melody divine

In a pattern exotic

Birds singing, lovers dancing

Music replayed in unison mystic

Thoughts inspired thus not mine.

To communicate with the universe,

Converse then with the verses terse

In a union divine with holy wine

Ascending the heights

Not peak and pine

But strivings versified in rhyme

— ishaq, Oct 29, 2008

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 7 months ago

Hi Ishaq...

Welcome to the site... a bit late... but I'm sure this poem was read and maybe not understood... Is the "Holy Wine" referred to a spiritual reading..? and if is.. maybe the read should be mentioned... it could refer to the reading of poetry... obscure with its meanings but a good write... and a mystery is a good thing at times... Richard