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ishaq
Jul 15, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Nourishing a Thought Sublime

Nourishing a Thought Sublime Living in peace until the last breathA union divine in distinct breadth.Fortitude nourished in solitudeA matter of attitudeUnity of the souls Not fitting into the cowlsWith fat jowlsHave only deeds foulWaking up to serenity of certitude With the treasures of eternal beatitudeNourishing a thought sublimeA symphony not of the mind finite. 
— ishaq, Jul 15, 2010
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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Hello again

A lovely thought. My favorite lines: Waking up to serenity of certitude With the treasures of eternal beatitude Nourishing a thought sublime A symphony not of the mind finite. Always, Cat

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