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Dancing not an entity unmanly

Dancing not an entity unmanlyFor the hearts probing With a fire underneath.Searching in unison an identity heavenly;Recognizing the Reality within.Thoughts mine wandering sublimely,Even though in a crowdMaddening and distracting.Soaring high on a plane distantlyOver vales and hills;In the inner depths of the unionOf the souls searching.Not in disbelief hearts gazingAt the crowd surging;Far away from time and spaceNot the herd but an individuality.
— ishaq, Oct 02, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hello

Great write and very vivid, love your last 4 lines. Well done on this great write. Love Lyz. XX
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ishaq

16 years 8 months ago

Thanks

Dear Love Lyz. XX Thank you very much. Ishaq