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Seeking the One

Neither one thing nor the otherWho I am, where I amBetween the rising and the setting sunNone but the OneBetween the dusk and the dawnNone but the OneNot on the run, but under the sunRiding the best horse wonMe alone in the long runRecognizing Him in none but the OneWith a disposition passionate,Seeking the One at long last won. .
— ishaq, Jun 15, 2010

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xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Hi Ishaq

Seeking your desire and finding the right one is all we can ever ask for...nice write. Perhaps using the word one a little less may read better. Just a suggestion. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell