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Jul 13, 2010
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Love Unveiled
Love Unveiled Veiled my love stands unveiledIn my cries hailedMelodious tones, not humdrum choresBreaking the chains surreptitious mundaneSailing with the music of currentsIn an ocean of loveDeep my longing between birth and deathMovements mine in a course spiralHow graciously favoured!Showerings on a weakling with failingsFledged and featheredHow infinitely have I wonderedSensibilities with infant feelings.
— ishaq, Jul 13, 2010
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Candlewitch
15 years 10 months ago
hello ishak
ishaq
15 years 10 months ago
Thanks.