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Love Unveiled

Love Unveiled Veiled my love stands unveiledIn my cries hailedMelodious tones, not humdrum choresBreaking the chains surreptitious mundaneSailing with the music of currentsIn an ocean of loveDeep my longing between birth and deathMovements mine in a course spiralHow graciously favoured!Showerings on a weakling with failingsFledged and featheredHow infinitely have I wonderedSensibilities with infant feelings. 
— ishaq, Jul 13, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

hello ishak

A lovely poem. My favorite lines: Sailing with the music of currents In an ocean of love Deep my longing between birth and death Movements mine in a course spiral Always, Cat