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ishaq
Sep 15, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Musky Dawn

Musky Dawn Sunrise finds me remembering GodSunset leaves me brooding the oddWhere I come fromWhere I am goingAsks a babe in armsGlittering night-clubs not the answerTalking vaingloriously all in vainLife for making merry just a baneAbsurdities of the odd I amOr profundities of the thoughts in jamThoughts baked while awakeThoughts budding in the nudeBy now known to gnostics muteCries sublime at sacred sitesUnlike a halloo at murky nightsSouls crying in contemplation  Lost in abstractionsAnd in animationFor the dawn muskyIn submission and salutations.
— ishaq, Sep 15, 2009

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Darby Cain

16 years 8 months ago

hard to follow

just my opinion if u rhyme the end of the line continue that or if you rhyme with in the line thats cool. but both makes the flow choppy
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Hi

Great write and read. I could feel the tears. How sad this poem. I hope all souls lost find their way home and peace prevails. Love Lyz. XX