tanha

Member since January 4, 2009

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Submerged

Posted Jun 9, 2010 · 11 lines · 1 critiques

Who are
You

It's
Your glance
Or a lake

In which
I'm being submerged

tanha’s timeline

January 2024
03 Wed

Anniversary
15 years of membership
January 2019
03 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2014
03 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2010
26 Sat

Received a critique
on Submerged from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. Your piece is short and to the point. Always, Cat"
26 Sat

Received a critique
on LAST WISH from @yenti
"This didn't flow to good but it can be fixed with a wider use of words, and some spaces for us old ones to breathe quite good otherwise, Yours Ian.T"
09 Wed

Posted a poem
Submerged
"Who are"
Open thread 11 lines
06 Sun

Received a critique
on Long distance from @Arrow
"Everything is big here Like size of this country Insecurity loneliness Fear *Maybe end the stanza here so the idea of fear doesn't get diminished by being sandwiched between the two lines below. Also, the two lines belo…"
05 Sat

Posted a poem
LAST WISH
"Last wish is just so"
Open thread 22 lines
04 Fri

Critiqued
"Faithless/ The Reverse is True" by @lou
""no more those honey coated words that slipped down so well" frequently felt,but rarely said Nice work God bless you"
03 Thu

Received a critique
on No More Plays Now from @xena465
"No matter how hard one tries to forget someone, it seldom works...nice write. Just one thing perhaps you meant to say in this line... To {spent} this coin ………....[spend] Xena"
03 Thu

Posted a poem
No More Plays Now
"You must have forgotten me"
Open thread 12 lines
03 Thu

Critiqued
"The dust of lust" by @ShePra
"...............this way, soul was miles ahead the body well written, keep going god bless you"
May 2010
31 Mon

Received a critique
on You say from @lou
"I think it's a little short lou xx"
31 Mon

Posted a poem
You say
"You say"
Open thread 12 lines
28 Fri

Posted a poem
Long distance
"Everything is big here"
Open thread 17 lines
28 Fri

Received a critique
on This time from @ShePra
"It’s beautiful & what I feel was... This time when you come Come & reside Reside in my eyes So that my sight Leads to you... I loved the theme of your poem it leads to many directions keep writing.. God Bless You.."
27 Thu

Received a critique
on This time from @Kailashana
"There's an ephemeral quality to this, I can't get my head around or my hands on. I read your other poems. I think you are soon a force to be reckoned with. ~ "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can obser…"
27 Thu

Posted a poem
This time
"This time"
Open thread 36 lines
January 2010
03 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
September 2009
17 Thu

Critiqued
"sometime I feel" by @ShePra
"To carry oneself honestly, is tough to do..................you did to an extent,somehow something is missing keep going"
June 2009
17 Wed

Received a critique
on gravity from @ShePra
"yes definitely.. u have a gravity.. that do attract.."
17 Wed

Critiqued
"I am falling" by @ShePra
"Dear shepra, From where you get these words from,if it's a tree pass me the seeds,with time may be i can also have such beautifuly crafted words for my writings. Good job,keep going & god bless u always"
17 Wed

First critique offered
on "I am falling" by @ShePra
17 Wed

Posted a poem
gravity
"I have my own gravity"
Open thread 6 lines
May 2009
29 Fri

First publication
glimpse
29 Fri

Posted a poem
glimpse
"Don't paint"
Open thread 7 lines
January 2009
03 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 146 days later.