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Shayla rae
Member since June 22, 2010
Member for 15 years, 11 months
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pain
you cause me so much pain,
it's like dancing atop of glass,
my tears fall down like rain,
cuz you have knuckles hard like brass.
you throw me around,
you push me to the ground,
you hit me up,
and you hit me down.
i beg you stop,
i try to crawl away,
you drop your hand,
and beg for me to stay.
i'm through with you,
and all you do,
i'll find someone,
someone new.
Shayla rae’s timeline
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15 years of membership
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5 years of membership
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One year of membership
- July 2010
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- June 2010
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25 Fri
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24 ThuReceived a critique
on ♥ love ♥ from @shirley harrison
"wonderful thought of love! shirley harrison" -
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24 ThuCritiqued
""Flying on the wing of an Angel"" by @shirley harrison
"wow, this poem is great, for all who can imagine that heavenly gate:) deep poem i really enjoyed it:) thx" -
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24 ThuReceived a critique
on we don't belong from @xena465
"Yes I agree, very nice poem I think you may have meant to say on this line... {her} by my side. ...........[here] Just want to help. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Ru…" -
24 ThuReceived a critique
on we don't belong from @TimeIsNotAPromise
"words cant even explain this sort of thing or at least i dint think they could but you've proven me wrong good work :) very heart felt touching Desu Haley" -
24 ThuReceived a critique
on ♥ love ♥ from @TimeIsNotAPromise
"i think you did a great job and pulled it together nicely but it seemed like you struggled a bit to make it ryme there in the end "love can make you sin" it doesnt seem quite as deep as the rest of the poem you might wo…" -
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23 WedCritiqued
"I Found the Source of Poetry" by @Pugilist
"great poem; iam looking for a mentor, i was wondering if you would be willing to be my mentor? i understand completely if you are too busy thx shayla rae" -
23 WedCritiqued
"Rules of the world" by @Alice Ember
"this poem is very true but kinda depressing. lol. bit it is very good!" -
23 WedCritiqued
"fuck it {IM LEAVIN}" by @Blaqueman
"this is really deep, and very passionate! i enjoyed reading this.:)" -
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22 TueFirst publication
♥ love ♥
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22 Tue
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22 TueFirst critique offered
on "Afraid of love" by @Alice Ember
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21 MonJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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