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Jun 24, 2010
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pain
you cause me so much pain,
it's like dancing atop of glass,
my tears fall down like rain,
cuz you have knuckles hard like brass.
you throw me around,
you push me to the ground,
you hit me up,
and you hit me down.
i beg you stop,
i try to crawl away,
you drop your hand,
and beg for me to stay.
i'm through with you,
and all you do,
i'll find someone,
someone new.
it's like dancing atop of glass,
my tears fall down like rain,
cuz you have knuckles hard like brass.
you throw me around,
you push me to the ground,
you hit me up,
and you hit me down.
i beg you stop,
i try to crawl away,
you drop your hand,
and beg for me to stay.
i'm through with you,
and all you do,
i'll find someone,
someone new.
— Shayla rae, Jun 24, 2010
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Critiques
Lil Z
15 years 11 months ago
Good job!
Shayla rae
15 years 11 months ago
yes i am new, and thank you
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Yeh Shayla
Shayla rae
15 years 11 months ago
thx:)
yenti
15 years 11 months ago
Shala