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Jun 24, 2010
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You
Patiently waiting for
A filler for this void in my heart
My mind wraps around this thought
But it will never stop once it starts
Under the dark folds of life, I know there is light
No matter how weak I am, I know I can fight
As long as I have hope, there will always be you
To pick me up when I'm down
To speak the truth when there's only lies
The soft smile to change my frown
My help to succeed after countless tries
Inside the dark hole of life, you are my light
No matter how weak I am, for you I will fight
When I'm trapped in silence, I hear soft words spoken
Though my heart is fragile, it will not be broken
As long as I have hope, it will be kept by you
Sitting blind in the dark... searching
My eyes try to focus... learning
That they can't make you come faster
I have no control... over you
A filler for this void in my heart
My mind wraps around this thought
But it will never stop once it starts
Under the dark folds of life, I know there is light
No matter how weak I am, I know I can fight
As long as I have hope, there will always be you
To pick me up when I'm down
To speak the truth when there's only lies
The soft smile to change my frown
My help to succeed after countless tries
Inside the dark hole of life, you are my light
No matter how weak I am, for you I will fight
When I'm trapped in silence, I hear soft words spoken
Though my heart is fragile, it will not be broken
As long as I have hope, it will be kept by you
Sitting blind in the dark... searching
My eyes try to focus... learning
That they can't make you come faster
I have no control... over you
— RolaytraLynn, Jun 24, 2010
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Shayla rae
16 years 1 month ago
wow great poem:)it is very
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Welcome to Neo RolaytraLynn
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