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Shango007
Member since March 1, 2010
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Room service, please
as my mind slouches off ancient aggregates of consciousness
i wonder if my motives are pure
are they more than just a ploy
a plot to arouse feminine sensitivities
by the arts of fine-tuned terms and jargon
may i be allowed the transgression of
free expression as i window-dress
my intent with goldleaf and rummage through my mental dictionary
fit the soldered pipes and explosive concepts together
into a contraption which could kill or heal
all through the potency or inertness
of its components as they manipulate
sonic waves
the vibration of air as it
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aids the subconscious in forming ideas
which bubble upwards in effervescent waves
lapping the cranium as its innards whir away
in frantic activity or
indifferent dozing
mandalas drawn into sandy plots of multicolored paths
which form concentric rings and intricate alleys
of a city of gods
which truly resides in the psyche and which forms a framework a structure
which, once completed, seamlessly flows from one
point to the next
a matrix within an enigma within a walnut shell
within the universe
meow
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- May 2010
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26 WedReceived a critique
on Room service, please from @arja
"..hey, this is really cool... not much to say... :)" -
20 ThuReceived a critique
on Room service, please from @Seren
"Thoroughly enjoyed the read ... thanks for sharing this one ... nothing to crit other than Cats suggestion which I thinks sound love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For eve…" -
20 ThuReceived a critique
on Room service, please from @Candlewitch
"My favorite lines are: my intent with goldleaf and rummage through my mental dictionary fit the soldered pipes and explosive concepts together into a contraption which could kill or heal all through the potency or inert…" -
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- April 2010
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28 Wed
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- March 2010
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01 MonFirst critique offered
on "with the lessening of light" by @Seren
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01 MonFirst publication
A modest try
- February 2010
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28 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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Location: USA
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Room service, please
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Growth
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the man of witsdom
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the poetato
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Just another poem ;)
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suspended animation
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confounding codices (as edited by Jane-Chloe-many thanks and I will add/sever in the future)
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lazy Baghdad afternoon
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