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her song

I hear a song within your heart
No other can hear its enchanting sound
Captivates my mind with unique clarity
Whispers to my soul with melodic chords

Come with me it beckons
Stay a while with me my love
No other can give what you crave
Destined desire cannot be fought

The power of her song is a sleeping truth
Ever present gestures from a loving heart
A Muse, an Angel, I cannot decide
Don't go oh song please play for me

Oh Mother Natures gentle power
Her call so strong like crashing seas
Subsides for a breath but never too late
Oh sweet girl for where did you come?

Still the song whispers from your loving heart
You sing because I wish it so much
I hope with all I can ever hope
And I love like no other can do...

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xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Oh me oh my! You sure got

Oh me oh my! You sure got it bad..wish someone would love me like that...her loss I say! Rosina xena465
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 2 months ago

Hey Rosina..thanks for

Hey Rosina..thanks for reading my poem...to me this poem is the powerful unique song of the heart that only sounds familiar to your one true love.... Best regards Stu :-)
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 2 months ago

Looked up what a Kelpie was....

Looked up the Kelpie and found this interesting extract....thanks Seabhac There was one way in which a Kelpie could be defeated and tamed; the Kelpies power of shape shifting was said to reside in its bridle, and anybody who could claim possession of it could force the Kelpie to submit to their will. A Kelpie in subjugation was highly prized, it had the strength of at least 10 horses and the endurance of many more, but the fairy races were always dangerous captives especially those as malignant as the Kelpie. It was said that the MacGregor clan were in possession of a Kelpies bridle, passed down through the generations from when one of their clan managed to save himself from a Kelpie near Loch Slochd. As I have mentioned above many of these water spirits may be related to ancient worship passed down in the diluted form of folk tales and legends. The wide distribution of the tales and the similarity in nature of water spirits lends weight to this argument. Water must have had a duel nature to our ancestors as a life giver but also a life taker reflected in the treachery of water spirits. I dont think I should worry so much Seabhac After all I am a McGregor!
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 2 months ago

Ha ha good one

Och aye a McGregor now are we...now THAT explains the teeshirt on your aviatar......
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Just loving it

I am drawn to your words, so postive and breath taking and I like it very much. I shall return once again and would love you to take a peek at mine also. Magics02 xoxoxoo "Determination Brings Success"
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 2 months ago

Thankyou for your kind words

Thanks for stopping by and reading my little poem... Im glad you liked it..I will be sure to read some of yours soon Best regards Stu :-)
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Shining Star

16 years 2 months ago

Just lovely

How lovely Stuart...well done
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 2 months ago

Thankyou :-)

Hey thankyou Shining Star.... I like the INXS song of the same name...bit of a fan here lol best regards Stu :-)
arja

arja

16 years 2 months ago

…(sigh)reminds me of a

...(sigh)reminds me of a love letter,but this is more than that..a symphony playing a melody that inspires the soul and uplifts the heart... }}}APPLAUSE{{{
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 2 months ago

wow thanks....

Hey Alone97 thanks for stopping by and having a read.. Really glad u liked it and happy to have shared it with you Best regards Stu :-)
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Stu

Just a big *sigh* from moi love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Breathless

You are coming along in leaps and bounds. Loved it. XX
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Good

I am so pleased to hear that for sure. Love to both. XX