Nature Mithya

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Tamed

Posted May 9, 2018 · 22 lines · 2 critiques

Moon light slips and seeps to touch
your delightful savoury curves as I peep
let my fingers trace their softness
to bring you pleasure quivers of joy,

Uncovered your glow with warmth
tremble in desire as my tongue probes
freely invade the privacy of your body
taking turns to lick dig and delve with zeal,

Raving uproars, barbaric clamour for more
induce a mayhem of desperation within
surge of a breathless surrender to my whim
cool work, widen’s resources to my glee,

While pleading cries make you go hoarse
demanding a full release from your woes

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to seek new potential to a unique fusion
dissipates energy from ecstasy raptures,

While the beast in me swells the warrior
as waves of urges from your bottom line
burst to incite, entreat longing for more
parts to open, enslaved by carnal intent,

Enchanting moments with naked passion;
Perform to tame your breaking resistance!

Nature Mithya’s timeline

May 2023
05 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
January 2020
26 Sun

Received a critique
on Tamed from @samary
"Hi intimate poem I am a fan of a little erotic but I think you need a little polish to really make this work. I love your first line and most of your second there is a lovely flow ending in I peep which stopped me as a…"
26 Sun

Received a critique
on Tamed from @c lynn brooks
"line 1 I would add -in- after the word seeps line 2 perhaps the word peek would be a better word than peep All in all I find little wrong The wording was well thought out"
May 2019
05 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2018
09 Wed

Received a critique
on Envy from @raj
"I will keep reading your posts. As a policy..whenever I have doubts about how my comment will be received by individuals who have historically not liked them,,,i prefer to keep quiet rather than invite an acidic retort…"
09 Wed

Posted a poem
Tamed
"Moon light slips and seeps to touch"
Open thread 22 lines
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Envy from @raj
"I never said anything about "bondage" did I...however it appears that for some reason it gave you that feeling...apparently you are offended by my comment which was with a good intention but since you feel offended I sh…"
08 Tue

Posted a poem
The Superlative Moon
"The silvery lustre in its new found aura"
Open thread 14 lines
08 Tue

Critiqued
"BEYOND THE VEIL" by @scribbler
"Lovely thoughts with a heavenly view of the universe as one goes through the black hole to be born anew! Like the way you lead your thoughts to flow with words that end with a great punch we believe could be the reality…"
07 Mon

Received a critique
on Envy from @gregwa8
"I like the play between sea, sun, sky, and earth. And the image of the sun climbing stairs. and interesting nature poem!"
05 Sat

Received a critique
on Envy from @Eumolpus
"you are introducing us to these great forces of nature that have beating hearts ...our most basic and primal imagination made these gods, and gave them love stories. I agree with the comments- tell us more! .."
05 Sat

Received a critique
on Envy from @raj
"Welcome to Neopoet. You are in the right place if you are looking to grow in your poetic skills and willing to accept constructive critique. Be courteous by responding to their comment. You will find a wide range of poe…"
05 Sat

Received a critique
on Envy from @chevyvent
"it appeals to all the known senses very together piece from the heart you got here."
05 Sat

Most-discussed work
Envy

12 critiques to date.
05 Sat

Posted a poem
Envy
"As the sun walks up the stairs"
Open thread 8 lines
05 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
June 2009
14 Sun

Critiqued
"Shaken Kaleidoscope" by @Blue_Halcyon
"....short write capturing poetic words in delight. Feel bad about leaving this site due to the policy of non deletion of your work. Congrats for sharing this poem with the world."
January 2009
16 Fri

Critiqued
"Midnight Snack (Once more for Halloween!)" by @Rett
"Lol by now I think you would have been cannibalized; Congrats for surviving the Holocaust of misdeed of a ghoul in human body. Even the Ghoul would have left your body by now. So good luck in your future writes."
16 Fri

Posted a poem
Wild Stripper
"Spirits"
Open thread 1 lines
14 Wed

Posted a poem
Man Eaters On The Mat
"O!"
Open thread 1 lines
12 Mon

Critiqued
"Midnight Snack (Once more for Halloween!)" by @Rett
"Lol how I enjoyed the comments on this poem. Wink! Sweet Dates; Wonder which ones you let go and why? You really have fingers and a heart to burn."
12 Mon

Posted a poem
Plagued Ailment
"On"
Open thread 1 lines
10 Sat

Posted a poem
Game
"In"
Open thread 1 lines
09 Fri

Posted a poem
Fancy Exposures
"The"
Open thread 1 lines
08 Thu

Posted a poem
Liquid Embrace
"Rain"
Open thread 1 lines
04 Sun

Posted a poem
Sultry Move
"Blazing"
Open thread 1 lines
03 Sat

Posted a poem
Sensations
"A"
Open thread 1 lines
01 Thu

Critiqued
"Now Christmas is over..." by @Robert Melliard
"..... to think of how we celebrated a festival; today the children as they become independent, even though they may not be earning nicely, they love to enjoy in their age group. I think this gap is worldwide. You should…"
01 Thu

Posted a poem
Everlasting Love
"Walking"
Open thread 1 lines
December 2008
22 Mon

Critiqued
"Bubba and His Christmas Stocking Also, A Wish for You" by @Rett
".... Wow! I get it now you were the 'Santa' suffering such problems Lol. No wonder you should be angry with bubba at least he should have wagged his tail; but did not. A great imaginative write."
16 Tue

Critiqued
"What's love?" by @Robert Melliard
"....that makes us want to write about it.To capture its beauty in thought frozen in time. Congrats for a lovely write and the great emotions that you put down in memories sake. God is great for he surely has some one mu…"
16 Tue

Critiqued
"What's love?" by @Robert Melliard
"Let me consider a bull fighter with the red cloak to attract the bull. Ok to induce a bull to fight(love). Consider all the questions in your poem, as the She-Bull(girl) asks the fighter(You), as the you show the red cl…"
October 2008
15 Wed

Highest posting month
October 2008 — 19 poems
03 Fri

First critique offered
on "Growing up Concrete" by @Eduardo Cruz
September 2008
28 Sun

First publication
Fried Egg

5 years of membership

on Tamed from @samary

on Tamed from @c lynn brooks

One year of membership

on Envy from @raj

on Envy from @raj

"BEYOND THE VEIL" by @scribbler

on Envy from @gregwa8

on Envy from @Eumolpus

on Envy from @raj

on Envy from @chevyvent

Membership begins

"Shaken Kaleidoscope" by @Blue_Halcyon

"Midnight Snack (Once more for Halloween!)" by @Rett

"Midnight Snack (Once more for Halloween!)" by @Rett

"Now Christmas is over..." by @Robert Melliard

"Bubba and His Christmas Stocking Also, A Wish for You" by @Rett

"What's love?" by @Robert Melliard

"What's love?" by @Robert Melliard

October 2008 — 19 poems

on "Growing up Concrete" by @Eduardo Cruz

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