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May 24, 2009
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Shaken Kaleidoscope
You are viewed differently
By each set of erring eyes,
Attempting to be understood
With your various shades...
Shining brightly.
But taken for different colors,
Misunderstood by the colorblind,
This element that was aimed for
Now becomes a beautiful mosaic
Of universal meaning and mystery.
— Blue_Halcyon, May 24, 2009
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Morgana Tragic…
17 years 2 months ago
Yaaaaaaaaay Misty!
Geezer
17 years 1 month ago
Shaken Shades!
Blue_Halcyon
17 years 1 month ago
Hey guys
iverhyck
17 years 1 month ago
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Mark
17 years 1 month ago
It works
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
good handling
Barbara Writes
17 years 1 month ago
Very good
Ink Dragon
17 years 1 month ago
Yay for the contest winner!
Nature Mithya
17 years 1 month ago
A beautiful...
Seren
17 years 1 month ago
What a gorgeous view of
paparazii
17 years 1 month ago
Great write
Bonitaj
17 years 1 month ago
SHAKEN KALEIDOSCOPE
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