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Nature Mithya
Jan 01, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Everlasting Love

Walking


— Nature Mithya, Jan 01, 2009

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Country/Region: india

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Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Not sure

Not sure if I understand this one, but anyway may you continue to write beautiful (erotic) poems in 2009, Happy New Year, Robert.
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

Picture related writes are always......

......abstract.That is why I put the picture link with the poem.Kindly click on it and I am sure you will understand. For erotic writing one really needs very artistic pictures.Not the filthy ones one normally sees on the internet. Hope you will always like what I write for I admire your comments.Take them seriously. Thanks for your comments.
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poewriter58

17 years 5 months ago

nature

As always you have beautiful command of the language nicely done Chrys
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Nature Mithya

17 years 5 months ago

I am greatful to you for ....

.... what you say. My mother tongue was always Hindi, but due to my education in a public school I came to think in English and write; even today I think in English and translate my thoughts to Hindi. Lol bad Hindi is what I would call it. I would like to thank you for your comments and the courage they give me to write better in future, without pride.