MrRee

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Psychodelagasm

Posted Feb 13, 2010 · 20 lines

Thoughts streaming in and out
teeth ache as untiring jaws grind
heart beating hard and erratic
blood screaming though the veins

high emotions grab hold
breathing becomes heavy but calm
senses interact intensely
as we rise higher into the mystic realm

inside, looking out
barely grasping the strands of reality
outside looking in
unable to recognize the things we see

peaking hard over the top
arriving at the cusp of up and down

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crashing hard to the bottom
where only pieces can be found

slowly we pick ourselves up
gathering all the laughter and pain
the only thing left to ask...
When would you like to do this again?

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Posted a poem
Psychodelagasm
"Thoughts streaming in and out"
Open thread 20 lines
06 Sat

Received a critique
on Sunset (on Lake Erie) from @poewriter58
"Very well executed. I enjoyed reading this work Chrys"
January 2010
25 Mon

Received a critique
on Daydreaming with Mahler from @Seren
"Pandoum ??? I am still learning and thats what i thought this one was .. its brilliant I loved it love and hugs Jayne"
25 Mon

Posted a poem
Daydreaming with Mahler
"resting leisurely on the deck"
Open thread 20 lines
24 Sun

Critiqued
"performing alchemy " by @Seren
"Helps to complete the whole comment.... I think it is AWESOME"
24 Sun

Critiqued
"performing alchemy " by @Seren
"I very much enjoy this... The main goal of life is balance and this is there in sooo may ways... most don't understand that true alchemy isn't really about physical change but an internal change... the transmutation of…"
24 Sun

Posted a poem
Sunset (on Lake Erie)
"friends gather on the deck waiting for the sun to set"
Open thread 20 lines
20 Wed

Received a critique
on Lake Erie Winter from @Kailashana
"Hi neighbor! So brilliant with your pantoums...you evoke the erie-ness so... eerily beautiful. Thank you. ~A"
20 Wed

Received a critique
on Lake Erie Winter from @Lonnie
"Not an easy form to work with, but you've nailed it dead on! Love the language, the imagery, and the peaceful flow of this well-penned poem! Bravo!"
19 Tue

Received a critique
on Lake Erie Winter from @Nicole Michaels
"Ah! That's what I heard. Thanks for clearing that up. Kinda erie, don't ya think?"
19 Tue

Received a critique
on Lake Erie Winter from @Nicole Michaels
"This poem reads rather like a sestina. Very cool form to fool around with. I think you would like it, at least for this subject. A sestina creates some hypnotic effects with detail and sound that you touch on in this ve…"
19 Tue

Posted a poem
Lake Erie Winter
"as a cold breeze blows across the rolling waves"
Open thread 20 lines
14 Thu

Received a critique
on Sailing on Lake Erie from @Kailashana
"That's a very fine pantoume, kind sir, neighbor. ~Anna"
14 Thu

Posted a poem
Sailing on Lake Erie
"Watching the sailboat from the shore"
Open thread 24 lines
12 Tue

Critiqued
"Ecstasy (Pantoum)" by @Arrow
"well done... a very enjoyable read Thank you for sharing :^) Monty"
12 Tue

First critique offered
on "Ecstasy (Pantoum)" (since unpublished) by @Arrow
12 Tue

Received a critique
on Lake Erie Enchantment - A pebble chorus from @Seren
"I have read a lot of poetry but this ones new, even for me ... I had not heard of pantoum nor read one ... thoroughly enjoyed the experience ... you got me thinking anyway thank you for that well done .. And Arrows sugg…"
December 2009
20 Sun

Posted a poem
Lake Erie Enchantment - A pebble chorus
"as waves roll along the shore"
Open thread 20 lines
18 Fri

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Northern Light over Lake Erie
"Streaking the evening sky with brilliant colors"
Open thread 20 lines
13 Sun

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My Promise
13 Sun

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My Promise
"an unyielding pain in my chest"
Open thread 16 lines
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on Sunset (on Lake Erie) from @poewriter58

on Daydreaming with Mahler from @Seren

"performing alchemy " by @Seren

"performing alchemy " by @Seren

on Lake Erie Winter from @Kailashana

on Lake Erie Winter from @Lonnie

on Lake Erie Winter from @Nicole Michaels

on Lake Erie Winter from @Nicole Michaels

on Sailing on Lake Erie from @Kailashana

"Ecstasy (Pantoum)" by @Arrow

on "Ecstasy (Pantoum)" (since unpublished) by @Arrow

on Lake Erie Enchantment - A pebble chorus from @Seren

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