My Promise

Hello and welcome to the site, first of all, I'd like to congratulate you and your wife for your 30 plus years of being together, and how could two people be together that long and not have some rocky times, ehh. Your poem, center alignment on Neopoet doesn't usually help a poem esthetically, it wraps around the profile picture and offsets the look of the poem. I recommend using left alignment for a more pleasing view. I felt the poem could have been tightened up, taking out a word here and there without hurting the idea presented, but I thought it was a good first post and I thank you for sharing it with us here. good luck, and keep writing Richard