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Sunset (on Lake Erie)

friends gather on the deck waiting for the sun to set chatting quietly while enjoying an evening cocktail the sun shines from behind wispy clouds on the horizon and splashes of evening shades glimmer off the waves chatting quietly while enjoying an evening cocktail the waters rush in quickly and slowly roll back out and splashes of evening shades glimmer off the waves as the sun creates a mirror image on the water's surface the waters rush in quickly and slowly roll back out the stones and sand of the beach sparkle brightly as the sun creates a mirror image on the water's surface presenting a panoramic view of heaven and earth the stones and sand of the beach sparkle brightly completing the evening canvas of water, sun, and sky presenting a panoramic view of heaven and earth colors beautifully blended into a brilliant palette completing the evening canvas of water, sun, and sky the sun shines from behind wispy clouds on the horizon colors beautifully blended into a brilliant palette friends gather on the deck waiting for the sun to set
— MrRee, Jan 24, 2010

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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

Mr.Ree

Very well executed. I enjoyed reading this work Chrys