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Jan 24, 2010
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Sunset (on Lake Erie)
friends gather on the deck waiting for the sun to set
chatting quietly while enjoying an evening cocktail
the sun shines from behind wispy clouds on the horizon
and splashes of evening shades glimmer off the waves
chatting quietly while enjoying an evening cocktail
the waters rush in quickly and slowly roll back out
and splashes of evening shades glimmer off the waves
as the sun creates a mirror image on the water's surface
the waters rush in quickly and slowly roll back out
the stones and sand of the beach sparkle brightly
as the sun creates a mirror image on the water's surface
presenting a panoramic view of heaven and earth
the stones and sand of the beach sparkle brightly
completing the evening canvas of water, sun, and sky
presenting a panoramic view of heaven and earth
colors beautifully blended into a brilliant palette
completing the evening canvas of water, sun, and sky
the sun shines from behind wispy clouds on the horizon
colors beautifully blended into a brilliant palette
friends gather on the deck waiting for the sun to set
— MrRee, Jan 24, 2010
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Mr.Ree