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Jan 19, 2010
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Lake Erie Winter
as a cold breeze blows across the rolling waves
over the wall, swirling the snow on the deck
chilling me as I gaze out across the water
I watch as layers of ice form on the beach
over the wall, swirling the snow on the deck
the mist of my breath crystallizes in the air
i watch as layers of ice form on the beach
remembering the dunes the layers become
the mist of my breath crystallizes in the air
as large gray clouds tumble across the sky
remembering the dunes the layers become
and the arctic appearance the lake takes on
as large gray clouds tumble across the sky
just the thought of gusting wind and snow
and the arctic appearance the lake takes on
reminds me winter has arrived once again
just the thought of gusting wind and snow
chilling me as I gaze out across the water
reminds me winter has arrived once again
as a cold breeze blows across the rolling waves
— MrRee, Jan 19, 2010
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Nicole Michaels
16 years 4 months ago
Sestina, anyone?
MrRee
16 years 4 months ago
This form is pantoum. I have
Nicole Michaels
16 years 4 months ago
Sestina's Phantom
MrRee
16 years 4 months ago
This form is pantoum. I have
Lonnie
16 years 4 months ago
Superbly-rendered Sir!
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Hi neighbor!So brilliant