karen

Member since November 12, 2010

Member for 15 years, 6 months

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Asleep and Unaware

Posted Apr 18, 2010 · 8 lines · 1 critiques

To sleep
is to be at peace
with Your mind closed
reality is shut out
it is only your dreams
that you will see
and when you awake
do you come back into reality

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November 2025
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Anniversary
15 years of membership
November 2020
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10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
November 2011
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Anniversary
One year of membership
November 2010
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Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
May 2010
05 Wed

Received a critique
on Asleep and Unaware from @loved
"....not sound unless its like death and then there is no question of dreams its all over do think it all over"
April 2010
18 Sun

Posted a poem
Asleep and Unaware
"To sleep"
Open thread 8 lines
17 Sat

Received a critique
on Devil's Friends from @sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
"To start I must say this is a subject close to my heart. The words placed are not to run from a toung yet in my mind they are keeping my eyes to the screen. Some people are to be of the mindset that all soldiers are ter…"
March 2010
30 Tue

Received a critique
on My Hero from @lyz
"Yes, the horror of war has its affect on all and I also feel for your loss. This is a lovely write. Lyz. XX"
30 Tue

Posted a poem
My Hero
"A soldier you was"
Open thread 12 lines
26 Fri

Posted a poem
Sawn and Gone
"            "
Open thread 22 lines
April 2008
16 Wed

First critique offered
on "Feel The Real" by @lovealone
March 2008
24 Mon

First publication
Fantasy