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A Golden Eagle
A Golden Eagle
While working in the pasture where the waters shed,
A golden eagle swooped just over my head.
I could feel the wind from his large wings,
As he flew to a near oak by the clearings.
The size of his body was humbling to me that day,
As he preached in the tree less than halfway.
I slowly walked under the oak limb,
And looked up at him.
With the Texas sun shinning he was beautiful to behold,
It looked as if he was wrapped in feathers of pure gold,
We gawked at each other eye to eye,
He nodded his head as if in reply.
I knew from his worn feathers that he was old and wise,
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Turning his head first left then right he agreed with a sigh.
His beak and talons were scarred and large,
Perhaps from many fights and use for forage.
There I asked him of his woe,
And my words he seemed to know.
He opened his great wings as he spoke
With a shrieking loud croak,
As to say “Old fool I’ve come to see why you dig in the dirt
Not for a lecture in my life’s assert!”
With that he moved his great wings and lifted off,
Leaving me in awe with such a grand takeoff.
Surely he was indeed a wise old bird,
But had not time to waste with an old buzzard!
drachm’s timeline
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02 TueAnniversary
15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
- December 2012
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19 WedReceived a critique
on Spring in the Texas Desert from @Esker
"my God never came to me through the spike the bottle I have driven through the desert in day and caught glimpses of it at night past a rushing van window...hoodoos.... long lit tunnels and sandstone cuts The desert is n…" -
15 SatReceived a critique
on Spring in the Texas Desert from @weirdelf
"It has few poetic values and mentiond god. Seriously, friend, read more eeally good poetry to learn more about it. Poetry is a an art, a craft, not just a description" -
11 TueReceived a critique
on A Golden Eagle from @weirdelf
"I apologise. I was once was a shaman, I understand symbols." -
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- November 2012
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- May 2009
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02 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2008
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15 ThuHighest posting month
May 2008 — 11 poems
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14 Wed
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03 SatFirst critique offered
on "Pleasures Of One" by @poewriter58
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03 SatFirst publication
The Crashing Mind (since unpublished)
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02 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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