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Pleasures Of One

Pleasures Of One

 

 

As I abdicate to your incessant touch

Perceiving inarticulate murmurings of your deepest needs

Of the insatiable libido which cries out to be pleased

 

The lucid cravings within me arise

Despite the divergence of thought unwanted

Such ebullient passion is not to be denied

 

The  touching of tongue to tongue

And lips upon  lips

The sensation of your hands upon my hips

Drawing me closer to  your copious lust

 

With one sharp breath I draw you within

The knowledge that this is where I should always have been

Flames over taking as bodies entwine

 

Undulating rhythm quickens to a heightened pace

Pulsing and surging as we embrace

Rivulets of passion stream down our face

 

In unison we moan at  the  threshold of endurance

Sealing this moment of self assurance

With a gasp and a sigh, a surging heat radiates from within

To the pleasures of you

There  is no end

 

 

 

— poewriter58, May 03, 2008

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MeanderS

18 years 1 month ago

This is terrific heat…n

This is terrific heat...n pleasant coolness...sweet n straight...shakes the bones...
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DarkinAZ

18 years 1 month ago

WOW,

I had to step back and reread... Putting behind me all the preceptions of you I was starting to aquire. (Kinda a Neopoet mother figure) With that said, I thought it was great! Your friend, Mark
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Mark

thank you that is exactly the affect I was looking for lol neo poets mother mother figure geesh!!!!!! Chrys
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Thank you

thank you for your comments I had fun with writing this one Chrys
themoonman

themoonman

18 years 1 month ago

Goodness...

what did they do to you in the hospital..lol sexy.. and smartly done. Isis does you well.. Richard
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Richard

Lol thank you they didn't do anything this was always me no one ever realized it blame Cat for bringing Isis out to play Chrys
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

drachm

many thanks to you good to hear from you Chrys
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

18 years 1 month ago

Can't say....

.... I'm fond of the subject matter, but it's yours and it flows well. And you tell me that I use big words!!! Good to see you writing again! :~) ~Lynn (Jess K.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ~ "Bush is listening.... use big words!" ~ "Your inferiority complex is better than mine..."
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Jess K

I warned you about the subject matter you just are not used to seeing this side of me but I guess it is hard seeing me in this light yes I'm writing again and ready to add the co writes to my book which reminds me ahem thanks Jess K oww there's that fierce kitty cat Chrys
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Amaranthine

18 years 1 month ago

Sexy

Sexy poem, Chyrs - very intense - I am not sure about the vocabulary - but then again if that is how you normally speak - then it works for you - for me - I'd have to put down the thesaurus and use incoherent moans ( just kidding) Good job - and it is nice to see you proving those labels wrong - mother? of neopoets? we don't need a mother here- we need PASSION and POETRY - well done! Sincerely, Amara
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Amara

Yes this is the way I speak ask the daughter up there although it depends largely to whom I am speaking thank you I'm trying very hard to destroy those labels lol Chrys
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Pleides

18 years 1 month ago

Thought I'd return the compliment

Hi poet, after your input to mine on my debut here, I thought I'd return the compliment. So I quote your most significant lines.......and congratulate you on them! "In unison we moan at the threshold of endurance Sealing this moment of self assurance With a gasp and a sigh, a surging heat radiates from within To the pleasures of you There is no end" Pleides
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Pleides

Thank you although it was totally unecessary it is very much appreciated Chrys
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

18 years 1 month ago

Hello Isis

Goodbye Mother figure (and good riddance to the old fuddy-duddy!) Of course I've always known that Mother Neo was a myth. Everyone who reads you should meet you in real life and then they would know, too. Anyways, it is good to see the real you emerging from your cocoon. I can't pick a verse/stanza I like best because all of them are damned good! Edge loves it! Always, Cat (except when I'm not, lol!)
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Cat My Dearest friend

finally she emerges thought Edge would like this one apparently so do you I'm still someones mother and a mother figure to her BUT consider this what was I before she came along aha she wasn't a myth nor found under a rock or cabbage leave or brought by a stork get the drift here lol and that is the image I am reclaiming here Chrys
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Paul Kloschinsky

18 years 1 month ago

Intensity

Great intensity and passion in this poem. "Flames over taking as bodies entwine" is a great image to me. Paul
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Paul

Thank you I take that as a great compliment after visiting your website and hearing what you have accomplished Chrys
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DarkinAZ

18 years 1 month ago

No offense?

Regarding the "mother" comment, please...Forgive me?..lol. Sincerely, Mark
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poewriter58

18 years 1 month ago

Mark

lol none take Mark as it is I am someones mother but alas not the mother of neo poet as a whole I thought it rather amusing lol Chrys
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Synchro

18 years ago

warning:

Those murmerings are about to become articulate! Wow. This is even better than that last one I read. I think we have the same philosophy. :-) Yours in peace, Synchro
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poewriter58

18 years ago

synchro

Thank you Chrys
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Whew!

Sweating with undulating passion! Wow! Hot stuff, need asbestos gloves. Rett ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Some call me lazy, I prefer Energy Conservationist~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That's P.C. speak by the way.
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poewriter58

17 years 11 months ago

Rett

What can I say Chrystalie