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MrRee
Member since December 12, 2009
Member for 16 years, 5 months
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Psychodelagasm
Thoughts streaming in and out
teeth ache as untiring jaws grind
heart beating hard and erratic
blood screaming though the veins
high emotions grab hold
breathing becomes heavy but calm
senses interact intensely
as we rise higher into the mystic realm
inside, looking out
barely grasping the strands of reality
outside looking in
unable to recognize the things we see
peaking hard over the top
arriving at the cusp of up and down
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crashing hard to the bottom
where only pieces can be found
slowly we pick ourselves up
gathering all the laughter and pain
the only thing left to ask...
When would you like to do this again?
MrRee’s timeline
- December 2024
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11 WedAnniversary
15 years of membership
- December 2019
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11 WedAnniversary
10 years of membership
- December 2014
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11 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- December 2010
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11 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- February 2010
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13 Sat
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06 SatReceived a critique
on Sunset (on Lake Erie) from @poewriter58
"Very well executed. I enjoyed reading this work Chrys" - January 2010
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25 MonReceived a critique
on Daydreaming with Mahler from @Seren
"Pandoum ??? I am still learning and thats what i thought this one was .. its brilliant I loved it love and hugs Jayne" -
25 Mon
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24 Sun
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20 WedReceived a critique
on Lake Erie Winter from @Kailashana
"Hi neighbor! So brilliant with your pantoums...you evoke the erie-ness so... eerily beautiful. Thank you. ~A" -
12 TueFirst critique offered
on "Ecstasy (Pantoum)" (since unpublished) by @Arrow
- December 2009
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13 SunFirst publication
My Promise
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11 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
About Me
Location: USA
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Psychodelagasm
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Daydreaming with Mahler
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Sunset (on Lake Erie)
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Lake Erie Winter
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Sailing on Lake Erie
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Northern Light over Lake Erie
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My Promise
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