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thegodshatter2
Member since August 3, 2014
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Hunching she cried, it fell on deaf ears.
anguish and agony feed on her tears.
She stops,
Holds her breath and wished she was free,
Softly she whispers,
why daddy,
Why me.
Half muttered truths,
Well spoken lies,
She sees through his rouse,
She knows this disguise.
you be a good girl,
Mommy said its alright,
I spoke to her in heaven,
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She said tonight was the night.
Crying now harder she drops to her knees,
Begs anyone listening for forgiveness,
As unwillingness starts to please.
A way to escape, freedom she craves,
But drugs are much cheaper,
She won't misbehave.
Torn and beaten, daddy's all done,
Now all his friends can join in the fun,
Crying for mommy she sobbed in choked gasps,
But knew these horrid moments would now be her last.
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03 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
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- August 2014
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22 FriReceived a critique
on beyond from @wesley snow
"A hard topic well done. I agree with some of comments that the rhythm could use tweaking, but I wouldn't change this wholesale. The rhyme structure is loose, but clearly delineated. The language use is solid. All in all…" -
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03 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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- June 2010
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- December 2009
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- November 2009
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23 MonFirst critique offered
on "Little Elephants" by @kitkat
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23 MonFirst publication
abuse of self
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About me
I'm quiet and fearful of most things around me. Cautious to say the least. 27. Male. Talk to me to know me.
Location: the corner of your eye
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