abuse of self

Welcome to the site, incarceration does give one time to reflect... I was wondering why some of the words were bolder... if it's to emphasize importance, it's unneeded... in poetry, each word is a layer in itself. I feel this poem isn't quite finished, for me it doesn't quite connect the title to the poem, but I could be missing something, I am old and slow at times... for me you have a great first draft, but it needs something for that connection... just one man's opinion, feel free to disregard my thoughts as I am often wrong... that damn human thing always getting in the way... welcome again Richard

Heya. Firstly thanx for the comment on my poem. Felt it was only fair to return the favour. I think i tend to agree with richard on this one. Much potential but it can definately be developed some more. Look forward to seeing some more work and gettin your opinion on some of my other work. X x x x cass