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Jul 12, 2010
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The Dissappearing
I am .......nothing
Made up of fallen dreams,
Crushed shadows,
Having not been able to live up to this convoluted and deformed body,
I am your washed bare lifestyle.
Tears fill my veins,
Anger pours from my curled lips.
Sadness in daggers,
All that i leave,
The path I cut through your life.
Woe and sickness,
Death and lies,
Being born of this.
Ignorance to be bliss when i am done
with your once beautiful body,
I will leave flesh torn and bruised,
Bones frayed and cracked,
The birthing is almost complete,
Kiss your loved ones for you are next........
Made up of fallen dreams,
Crushed shadows,
Having not been able to live up to this convoluted and deformed body,
I am your washed bare lifestyle.
Tears fill my veins,
Anger pours from my curled lips.
Sadness in daggers,
All that i leave,
The path I cut through your life.
Woe and sickness,
Death and lies,
Being born of this.
Ignorance to be bliss when i am done
with your once beautiful body,
I will leave flesh torn and bruised,
Bones frayed and cracked,
The birthing is almost complete,
Kiss your loved ones for you are next........
— thegodshatter2, Jul 12, 2010
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Critiques
Lonnie
15 years 11 months ago
Very dark and well-penned, GS!
mona
15 years 11 months ago
V. GOOD JOB
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Ah… always the
lou
15 years 10 months ago
GS