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The Dissappearing

I am     .......nothing

Made up of fallen dreams,

Crushed shadows,

Having not been able to live up to this convoluted and deformed body,

I am your washed bare lifestyle.

Tears fill my veins, 

Anger pours from my curled lips.

Sadness in daggers, 

All that i leave,

The path I cut through your life. 

Woe and sickness,

Death and lies,

Being born of this.

Ignorance to be bliss when i am done

with your once beautiful body,

I will leave flesh torn and bruised,

Bones frayed and cracked,

The birthing is almost complete,

Kiss your loved ones for you are next........
— thegodshatter2, Jul 12, 2010

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mona

mona

15 years 11 months ago

V. GOOD JOB

very good job my friend and I'm so happy its past things(wink) Mona
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Ah… always the

Ah... always the rebirthing... a life, re-examined... Well *executed* poem. Thanks. ~A "There is a kind of mysticism to writing." ~ Irvine Welsh
lou

lou

15 years 10 months ago

GS

Very nice write, just one tiny tweak, line 4 doesn't quite work, imaybe u could say 'My self image degraded,' or ' my body Image degraded.' Good stuff Lou xx