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Sen99
Member since May 29, 2020
Member for 6 years, 1 month
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Unmask The Batman
Every day I put a mask on
Wet, charcoal black
Exfoliating skin
Worn in public
A stern visage
It frightens strangers
The mask now removed
Vanishing in sunlight
Like an antihero
I'm faceless again
Sen99’s timeline
- July 2026
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09 ThuCritiqued
"The Poet's Task" by @Blue-eyed Bolla
"A concise poem, good title, the rhymes were smooth, with some nice alliteration, stanza 3 could be a run on sentence, the word trail, on a new line, stops flow. S4 has four hard rhymes end in -ing, maybe leave an unrhym…" -
07 TueCritiqued
"Fricken Fireworks" by @Lavender
"Hello Lavender Well said and well scribed, a very timely poem, more a protest at poor moral, ethical values and stupid fireworks, what have we done to this earth, to celebrate ? Thanks again Sen99" -
07 TueCritiqued
"The Ink Within" by @Sonia MK
"This is a well crafted poem of meta verse, a nice meditation on your own muse, the internal life of a writer, bringing ideas alive. Enjoyable read Thanks Sen99" -
07 TueCritiqued
"The Sound That Only Silence Makes" by @Misspoetrynportraits
"I agree with AI the poems main idea is an interesting one, silence is not an absence of sound but the sound of the mind itself, thinking at night. The stanzas are atmospheric and flow nicely. .An interesting monologue a…" -
07 TueCritiqued
"Similitude of The Rock" by @Allen
"An interesting title and theme, a creative poem about permanence of physical structure. The language was good, nice word choices, the imagery flowed with internal logic, left a feeling of profundity, an eternal rock. En…" - June 2026
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28 SunCritiqued
"A Siege Perilous" by @wisecrone2011
"Hello an enjoyable read, the theme is clever and interesting, the logic consistent, the word cjmhoice and imagery used builds a good flow for the reader from beginning to end. Nice share thanks Sen99" -
18 ThuReceived a critique
on Unmask The Batman from @nivivenkat
"Relatable - yes, we all wear masks for the outside world .." -
13 SatCritiqued
"Ocean of Grief" by @nivivenkat
"Glad you were able to share this poem, and express something very personal. Grief is an abstract noun, many poems on this subject, I've been struggling to write recently. Thanks again Sen99" -
11 ThuCritiqued
"Demolition by Text" by @RJ Bear
"What a catalogue of disasters ! a true maelstrom of mayhem all reported by text message, you have an interesting life ? thanks for the chuckle Sen99" -
11 ThuNew follower
@hbserge
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10 Wed
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05 FriReceived a critique
on Learning Bicycle from @crypticbard
"A truly fun read here. Never had an accident on my bicycle except once three years of so after when the front wheel went into a pothole and sent me flying. No other spills besides that." - May 2026
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24 SunReceived a critique
on Learning Bicycle from @Lavender
"Hello, Sen! A light, fun read! Great line about the luminous vest! I agree with other comments - I enjoyed this piece! Thank you, L" -
14 ThuReceived a critique
on Learning Bicycle from @Geezer
"I get it, I had the same feelings about my first motorcycle ride. I didn't want to do it in front of my friends, because I didn't want to be embarrassed. But, it all worked out. I'm sure that you can find someone who wi…" -
13 WedReceived a critique
on Learning Bicycle from @RJ Bear
"Hilarious and perfectly paced. You’ve captured that specific brand of 'adult anxiety' beautifully. Here's hoping you find your balance (and steer clear of the trees)!" -
13 WedReceived a critique
on Learning Bicycle from @eric.graphic
"I felt like you might have chased for rhymes a bit too much? Anyhow, pretty interesting with the self deprecation and anxiety. The "learning how to ride the bike" part could be some sort of fear of performance or vulner…" -
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- April 2026
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12 SunReceived a critique
on Dreams Deferred from @RJ Bear
"This is an awesome piece. That opening line, calling a dream false advertising is such a sharp way to describe that subconscious betrayal. I loved the image of a dream as an flight film playing backwards it's perfectly…" -
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07 TueReceived a critique
on Dreams Deferred from @Leslie
"I have always loved the imagery in your poetry, this one is different and still so beautiful. I wish that I could capture your imagination, if only for a few rough shod lines. My memory fails me and sometimes eludes me…" -
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- March 2026
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- February 2026
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25 WedNew follower
@ritam
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19 ThuNew follower
@William Lynn
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12 ThuNew follower
@Leslie
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- January 2026
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- December 2025
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- November 2025
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- September 2025
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15 MonHighest posting month
September 2025 — 6 poems
- May 2025
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29 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2025
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- October 2024
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- August 2024
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- January 2024
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- August 2022
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20 SatContest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week contest August 14 to August 20 2022
with "The Vanishing Man".
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20 SatFirst contest commendation
Neopoem Of The Week contest August 14 to August 20 2022
with the poem "The Vanishing Man".
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17 Wed
- May 2021
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29 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2020
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01 MonFirst critique offered
on "See? They deserve it..." by @Geezer
- May 2020
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29 FriFirst publication
What Buddha Says
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29 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Hello a poet looking to meet new writers and improve, learn more about the craft and become more Inspired. Look forward to reading and hearing from all of you out there
Location: Nottinghamshire England, GBR