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Vanishing

The sun burns brilliantly. Blazing threw my soul. To balm my numb body. Making me feel once again. I can feel it liquefy the ice within. Cold water seeping down my arms and legs. Creating crystal tears, dropping form my fingertips. You are my sunbeam, my blazing star. You are my ardent light.

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Mark

Mark

19 years 3 months ago

Your poem

shows that certainly love poems are not overdone.  Natalie, this is superb!  A wonderful experience.  Thank you