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Roscoe Lane
Member since October 27, 2010
Member for 15 years, 7 months
Communique Frozen.....
Communique Frozen...
Telephone lines covered in ice,
communications all frozen out.
People twittering, some not nice,
presidential hair lip starts to pout.
An election in the offing, poor show,
so many hours spent doting or voting.
Do we really need stupidity tied in a bow,
then five misspent years simply gloating.
These the candidates our very own,
nothing but the best in town or not.
Fretting, betting all deeds are sown,
goons to make sure they’re hot to trot.
The white house is in melt down,
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their chief is all tweets and twiddles.
It’s not his fault he’s seen as a clown,
a country squirms as he still fiddles.
Let’s get to it go on pick your side,
red or blue both promising much.
Couple of years they’ll begin to slide,
it’s not their fault we’re an easy touch.
Campaigns run by media pros,
not ordinary folks like you or I.
Honesty among thieves god knows,
not this lot they’re paid to lie.
Wrap the people’s needs up like gifts,
shove back hard on rhetorical sins.
Prepare to change if the mood shifts,
after all who cares as long as we wins.
Win for the people don’t be a fool,
we want power to help pay our debt.
Our paymasters are from an old school,
no, they haven’t given us the price yet.
Hey ho as long as we have power,
we’ll let the clowns who vote pay.
We shall be safe in an ivory white tower,
as long as the corporates are allowed
to prey.
Roscoe Lane’s timeline
- October 2025
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27 MonAnniversary
15 years of membership
- July 2023
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23 SunReceived a critique
on Seedling's seed to Earth from @Geezer
"you are feeling better. Never had gallstones but have heard they are quite painful. I hope to hear more from you, now that you are writing again. ~ Geez. ." -
22 SatReceived a critique
on Seedling's seed to Earth from @Geezer
"couldn't believe it when I saw your edit of this one! Where you been? I thought that maybe you had got taken out with the Covid Virus or something. Hope you stick around. We've missed you. ~ Geez. ." - October 2020
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27 TueAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2020
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16 ThuReceived a critique
on Communique Frozen..... from @lovedly
"I POST more wasteful machine gun poet read less now I am under control of jess" -
02 Thu
- November 2019
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28 Thu
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04 Mon
- October 2015
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27 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2014
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15 Tue
- April 2012
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12 ThuCritique milestone
1,000 critiques given
- October 2011
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27 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2011
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23 WedPosting milestone
100 poems posted
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15 TueHighest posting month
March 2011 — 17 poems
- October 2010
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27 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- November 2009
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05 ThuFirst critique offered
on "A Black Rose For You" by @greeneyes
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02 MonFirst publication
Ponders the pond
About Me
Location: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR
Recent Work
Swimming Days of Roscoe
A Tale Beguiling
My Swan
Sugary days for children,
Anthem
Red Rose your Blue,
Ponders the pond
Contest Wins
This member has not yet won any contests.
Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
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| Naked Emotion, Truth and Originality | (syllabus) | Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool | Started 2013-07-30 | Concluded |
| Mindful Memorable Freeform: The Challenge | (syllabus) | Shark Pool | Started 2012-08-31 | Concluded |
| Shark Pool (initial workshop) | (syllabus) | Shark Pool | Started 2011-05-16 | Concluded |