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My Swan

  You see her radiance as we write
  She cares not for down of white
  The name i feel if she would give
  Is only what she needs to live
  
  No brush, or words, to make her art
  What cares she that we take part
  Such tender neck and circle round
  Once a sight, what need for sound 

  Her regal head will rise above
  This art hers, mine to love
— Roscoe Lane, Nov 10, 2009

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Region, Country: Scotland, Ayrshire land of Burns.., GBR

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greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 7 months ago

magical

Wow! This was just beautiful. This visions that come to my head as I read this........... love, Greeneyes
Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

Thank you so much, she is real i love watching her. Roscoe..
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

hello

Excellent structure and your language usage was enthralling. I loved the theme. Very dreamy rhyming. Always, Cat