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A Black Rose For You
There is a lady who roams through the night
Picking her victims as the moon shines bright
Her beauty is perfect,she is charming and coy
Looking for some poor chap, she can use as a toy
With her hair raven black, and lips red and full
They can not resist her unrelenting pull
She has eyes the color of emeralds, with olive dark skin
A body that screams "I am made just to sin!"
She lurks in the twilight, with her nocturnal creatures at her feet
You will be doomed if she walks down your street
She will smile at you and make you her tool
Now you are trapped you ridiculous fool
You had the chance to run,but now it is past
Better enjoy your orgasm,cuz it will be your last
She will kiss your lips and make your manhood real hard
She will make you think you are sexy, you fat piece of lard
When she is done, you will be blood spattered from your head to your toes
Next to your head she will place a single black rose
She will laugh herself silly as she slips from your bed
Hope that sex was worth because now you are dead!
Critiques
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
I love the anger...
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
wow
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
I love the title
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
Lyz
Roscoe Lane
16 years 7 months ago
Not a great deal to say. It
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
Its just a poem dude about a
Roscoe Lane
16 years 7 months ago
I beg forgiveness
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
no im sorry
Roscoe Lane
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you, and once again,
Ravenshakti
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Green Eyes...
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
We are a strange concoction,
Dalton
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Greeneyes
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
thank you