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mdehe
Member since July 14, 2011
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The Jungle...
The citys like an urban jungle
Contraditions of life in every bubble
Too much hype over constant struggle
Like learning to ride a bike to a rabid dog with no muzzle
We gotta huddle
Come together to fuck trouble
Escape it's shitty weather like the shuttle endeavour finding space rubble
What?
That was muddled
Still it's enough
Oh so subtle
But it's a must we settle like the old west
A conquest for a medal
A detest like Hansel to Grettle
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Use metal for a Buddha chest not battle
See the mood outlasts the best
Even a cowboy in a saddle
Where the food is less
You'll see
Well travelled
Like to Budapest
Where most people haggle
Fuck the news guest
This place is magical
Like a good sue chef
Or a tight vaginal bitch with a big chest
I'm mighty like a radical insect
With my rhymes spiking with each and every breath
The lion king describes my quest
Timone the pest
Louder then a trombone in the orchestra
And I'll metamorphous ya
Like endorphins to regulate
Just one more spin I'm bettin' eight
I'ma win then eat a plate of sin
My fates nearly the begining'
So I'm gainin' weight like the pope from religion
Seems too late to dictate my pace like a pigeon
So I'm fidgitin'
Ponderin' gettin' wins
Wonderin' who sees these little kids
Seems to me like sea breeze
Invisibility
Don't got Potters abilities
Scary is misery
but inherited to feel chivalry
No wizzards for world war one, two, or three
Just blizzard, guns, and groups who believe
What they perceive worthy of death
My worry is stress
Not Hitlers wreck
So I bless
The men who weathered heck
And risked their neck
To make things better for the rest
So ask yourself
Would you fight and die for wealth?
How about your fellow mans help?
Doubt it
So put it on the shelf
It's clouded like Orions belt
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- December 2011
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27 TueReceived a critique
on Takes Time from @Candlewitch
"An interesting title for an interesting poem! In this line: its not right givin given were all living beings I think you should delete "givin" btw, nice to meet you! always, Cat" - July 2011
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25 MonReceived a critique
on The Jungle... from @Candlewitch
"A very interesting piece. It makes me wonder about your inspiration. Welcome to neo poet. In order to get to know the poets here, my suggestion is to read other poets works and leave responses to their work. In that way…" -
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First poem published 1 days later.
- May 2010
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03 MonReceived a critique
on A Bit Closer To Reality... from @weirdelf
"make a deal. You respond to this with why you think this poem got no comments, then I will tell you what I think of it, ok? Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "Faith is not a short-cut to knowledge, it is a shor…" - April 2010
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- April 2009
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15 WedHighest posting month
April 2009 — 11 poems
- March 2009
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25 WedFirst critique offered
on "She said she would !" by @Mike5242
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25 WedFirst publication
Cropping the Equarium
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