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Mar 15, 2010
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Scrutiny
Rippin' up the track
like I'm on a dirt bike feelin' so glad
Or usin' my third eye to bust on a back
after I thrust - no shy, no guy, no lie
It's a must that I get by livin' happily
I cuse when any family deals with autrocity
It's a monopoly in the way this dust spreads so rapidly
I dread the myserery I see optically
even mentally before bed I've said
"I can' take this end!"
Layin' I pretend I've been sent far away
to a place
with no reverends - just gettin' laid everyday
and "spade" by smokin' some hay
Chillin' by the bay, similar to Sandler gettin' paid
Won't kill anything with antlers, or raid
I get enraged when seein' pussies
getin down on thier knees
and shoot a livin' species
Still, I've never been to a rave
But, have done some ecstacy
Still, I behave
But, have done some bad things
But you see, these things, don't define me
I only smoke fine weed
it helps me think
so I don't go crazy
in this homosapien society
I'm lazy
unlike the Arabian salt farmers be
Still somehow I make money, unlike anyone would beleive
what's the realtion between luck,
life,
and interdependecy?
stars are struck with luck
as all gleaming life
given' the opportunity
With extreme scrutiny
I investigate tragedies
So let me through your gates
and listen to my poetry
It's my mission
to get through your cerebral stupidity
an idiocracy held by most human beings
like I'm on a dirt bike feelin' so glad
Or usin' my third eye to bust on a back
after I thrust - no shy, no guy, no lie
It's a must that I get by livin' happily
I cuse when any family deals with autrocity
It's a monopoly in the way this dust spreads so rapidly
I dread the myserery I see optically
even mentally before bed I've said
"I can' take this end!"
Layin' I pretend I've been sent far away
to a place
with no reverends - just gettin' laid everyday
and "spade" by smokin' some hay
Chillin' by the bay, similar to Sandler gettin' paid
Won't kill anything with antlers, or raid
I get enraged when seein' pussies
getin down on thier knees
and shoot a livin' species
Still, I've never been to a rave
But, have done some ecstacy
Still, I behave
But, have done some bad things
But you see, these things, don't define me
I only smoke fine weed
it helps me think
so I don't go crazy
in this homosapien society
I'm lazy
unlike the Arabian salt farmers be
Still somehow I make money, unlike anyone would beleive
what's the realtion between luck,
life,
and interdependecy?
stars are struck with luck
as all gleaming life
given' the opportunity
With extreme scrutiny
I investigate tragedies
So let me through your gates
and listen to my poetry
It's my mission
to get through your cerebral stupidity
an idiocracy held by most human beings
— mdehe, Mar 15, 2010
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
Matty, I like your poetry more and more.
mdehe
16 years 2 months ago
hey man
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
oh! insult the reader! It's fun!