MASAQIB

Member since June 15, 2012

Member for 13 years, 11 months

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SO CALLED

Posted Oct 25, 2023 · 11 lines · 1 critiques

So called world
Yell not a word
In favour of the oppressed
In hunger and death dressed
So called champions
The big democracies
Do not help the right
But back up the wrong
Help the usurpers to snatch
The land the house
The women that match

MASAQIB’s timeline

October 2023
25 Wed

Posted a poem
SO CALLED
"So called world"
Open thread 11 lines
June 2022
15 Wed

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2022
13 Thu

Received a critique
on A MIRROR from @Race_9togo
"Your title is good. I like your language, although it occassionally becomes a little obscure to me. But that's okay: english is a living language, and it often makes one have to stop and think. In general your cadence i…"
03 Mon

Posted a poem
A MIRROR
"What we receive"
Open thread 24 lines
June 2017
15 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2013
15 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2012
15 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
26 Sat

Received a critique
on MOTHER from @Candlewitch
"A clever write! Nice to meet you. Always, Cat"
08 Tue

Posted a poem
MOTHER
"Moments when life frightens"
Open thread 7 lines
March 2010
25 Thu

Received a critique
on Bulletproof conscience from @mark
"I'm not sure what makes this a sensitive matter of a poem. It does seem like a sort of rant to me. That is the experience I felt by way of the last stanza for sure. Done in a rather softer language so far as ranting sha…"
February 2010
28 Sun

Posted a poem
Bulletproof conscience
"Have you ever heard?"
Open thread 31 lines
27 Sat

Received a critique
on THE BLIND LOVE from @whitetea
"Interesting, how do you feel about this piece do you feel this is your first draft or do you feel it is finished? What are you looking for by posting this, do you want adviceon how to fine tune it or feedback on what I…"
27 Sat

Posted a poem
THE BLIND LOVE
"Beauty and love"
Open thread 40 lines
January 2010
14 Thu

Received a critique
on If you are a star from @weirdelf
"."
07 Thu

Received a critique
on A woman cries? from @emily messner
"wow thats deep i liked it and it is so true none can stay together and work out ther problems any more ...i find that kind of deppresing don't you think:)"
07 Thu

Posted a poem
A woman cries?
"I lament the so called liberty"
Open thread 23 lines
December 2009
29 Tue

Received a critique
on The Jaundiced Eyes from @Orphani
"I will there fore take the time to look into your work, but I am no expert, I am just like you a poet that loves poetry and wants to grow.Warm Regards Barry"
28 Mon

Received a critique
on The Jaundiced Eyes from @Orphani
"very poinant poem on religious intolerance and confusion. Barry ...o.."
28 Mon

Posted a poem
The Jaundiced Eyes
"The Jaundiced Eyes"
Open thread 46 lines
22 Tue

Posted a poem
If you are a star

Open thread
18 Fri

Posted a poem
Warm palms
"Warm palms"
Open thread 19 lines
15 Tue

Posted a poem
INSIGNIA
"When I was a little child"
Open thread 26 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
December 2009 — 5 poems
02 Wed

Posted a poem
A MIRROR

Open thread
November 2009
28 Sat

Posted a poem
MAN AND SEA (1)
"SEA"
Open thread 17 lines
October 2009
31 Sat

First publication
thaw