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A woman cries?

I lament the so called liberty

That has made me the slave

Of my lust and lost me into dust

 

Oh!  I was wife and a celebrity

Then was able to enclave

 With my husband in a gust

 

The awry, times have gone

Boys are there to make friend

I am devoid of husband

 

Marriage replaced its very form

Dating become the new norm

Gone has peace and the calm

 

Men devised the novel trends

The love affairs in dating ends

Wife is not there and husbands

 

The unique and unprecedented

The priceless and very exalted

Relations have defaulted


— MASAQIB, Jan 07, 2010

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emily messner

16 years 5 months ago

:)

wow thats deep i liked it and it is so true none can stay together and work out ther problems any more ...i find that kind of deppresing don't you think:)
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MASAQIB

16 years 4 months ago

rich man mind your

rich man mind your self,endlish is not a standard language at any cost.due to western hegemony the east is forced to adopt this so called language,so do not worry about this conglomerate of words that is english re read your poems after rewriting them man