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The Jaundiced Eyes

The Jaundiced Eyes

 

Man is never sick

Of the severe nick

 

In circle divide

Put humanity aside

 

Hiding in the hole

Religions play the role

 

All the opposite faiths

Sword unsheathes

 

In the other’s back

Stab and blood slake

 

For heinous acts

Divide men into sects

 

Everybody behind

Terrorist of a kind

 

To banish others

Sisters and brothers

 

Muslims and Jews

And Christian hews

 

Hindus and Buddhists

Are all fascists

 

If they deviate

And alleviate

 

The real teachings

And the preaching’s

 

Of their saints

Differently paints

 

Who is to come?

Dispose this bomb

 

Of jaundiced eyes

What’s, who’s and why’s


— MASAQIB, Dec 28, 2009

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Country/Region: PAK

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MASAQIB

MASAQIB

16 years 5 months ago

thanx

i would like to get expert advice from the people like you.you may guide me about poetical forms and ideas.i would appreciate it.
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Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

I will there fore take the

I will there fore take the time to look into your work, but I am no expert, I am just like you a poet that loves poetry and wants to grow.Warm Regards Barry
MASAQIB

MASAQIB

16 years 5 months ago

your comments

i think you belong to some eastern country,iran afghan or central asia,that is why u have chosen persian,i could understand a little not whole ,so i can only say if it is relevant thanks