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Nov 19, 2009
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LIKE THE RETURNING WAVES
LIKE THE RETURNING WAVES
The fragrance of love, you do not feel
Exuding from my agonies, pangs and grief
Wounds of harsh words that did not heal
You bestowed upon me, in my love’s brief
Wrapped around my heart is a long reel
Of memories, dreams like coral reef
Heart felt passions and the love sessions
The foaming waves and a great flair
For me notions your living fashions
Turned your head and give yourself air
You do not strive to establish relations
Like the returning wave who leaves a layer
Of the oceanic species and her beautiful signs
Can you not revive the deep love of mine?
— MASAQIB, Nov 19, 2009
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