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THE BLIND LOVE

Beauty and love

Together resided

Heavenly resorts above

And were guided

 

By the spirits divine

Incited them to always align

 

Gamboled they hand in hand

Place like a fairy land

 

Happy like victorious prince

Jealous were the happiness thence

 

Love, importune for beauty

Forgetting her divine duty

 

Hovered over like a moth

On the lightened luminous path

 

Never would they go astray

Promised under the broad day

 

One night they were making love

The beauty saw shining moon above

 

The moon light was so sweet

Beauties praised it and too repeat

 

Love was jealous of beauty infidel

Could not bear the moon rival

 

Come at beauty with a hard blow

Plucked out love’s eyes glow

 

Since that day the love is blind

And the beauty does not mind

 

Love and beauty part the way

Since that day are at bay


— MASAQIB, Feb 27, 2010

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whitetea

whitetea

16 years 3 months ago

Interesting, how do you feel

Interesting, how do you feel about this piece do you feel this is your first draft or do you feel it is finished? What are you looking for by posting this, do you want adviceon how to fine tune it or feedback on what I thought or felt when I read it? I dont know how to make my poetry rhyme and you did a great job of that. You gave this a bit of a mythic touch. Love is a very very strange land, no?