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marich7
Member since September 17, 2009
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This Addiction
One Kira Noir,
With some Riley Reid,
I know they're not real,
But they're real to me
Indulged in the vice,
Since the age of twelve,
Preacher preached sermon,
"You're going to hell"
Enticing allure,
Calling quietly,
"A little bit more,
Last time you'll see"
What is all of hope,
Trapped in misery,
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Washed with bloody cloth,
Rinsed in secrecy
Natural or not,
It feels like prison,
Nothing free about,
This indecision
No moral question,
More of discipline,
Chronic offender,
Struggling within
Pardoned affliction,
disguised as self-care,
Sermon remembered,
"I'm already there"
These shackles remain,
Shame then self-deceit,
The only release,
To rinse and repeat.
By: Maurice Hubbard
Date: 10/08/2022
marich7’s timeline
- September 2024
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16 MonAnniversary
15 years of membership
- October 2022
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08 SatReceived a critique
on This Addiction from @Geezer
"The title is a bit bland; I would suggest that you add something to it. Like maybe: [This Addiction] [What Addiction?] [An Addiction to My Addiction] Your rhyme, [not free-verse] makes this an easy read and the meter is…" -
08 Sat
- June 2021
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14 MonReceived a critique
on In the moment from @Geezer
"Detachment wasn't the right title for this. In the moment is much more suitable. I feel that you spent your time meditating wisely, excellent job! ~ Geezer. ." -
14 Mon
- September 2019
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16 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
- June 2015
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11 ThuReceived a critique
on Words for a Queen from @weirdelf
"If that happens when composing try pressing Shift-Enter, instead of just Enter. It won't start a new paragraph and will make the lines space normally. Otherwise I think the archaic language detracts. As Ian implied, by…" -
07 SunPosted a poem
Words for a Queen
"Pen burdened, for ink knoweth not the words to adequately define thee," - September 2014
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16 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2010
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16 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2009
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26 SatFirst critique offered
on "Looks Like Rain " by @Seren
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17 ThuFirst publication
Dream
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16 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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15 TueHighest posting month
September 2009 — 8 poems
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