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Cursed One's Last Resort

Sorrow is my life’s only definition,

The difference between my truth and what's fiction,

A tall tale of horror, both cruel and grim,

My light welcomes darkness but never fades, it just dims.

 

An endless spiral of pain and destruction,

Like blind leading blind with very little instruction.

Oh the agony, it’s killing me inside,

All this darkness and still nowhere to hide.

 

Ravaged my soul and disfigured the plains there of,

Left alone in this darkness, save the little light shone from above.

The deed is near done, the curse now run its course,

I say Au revoir to revenge and Bonjour to remorse.

 

This must be it, yes, this is the end,

I’ll reap what I’ve sown then pay for my sins.

Then I’ll lay with my burdens down in the earth,

And finally put an end to this drastic curse!

 

 

— marich7, Sep 23, 2009

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Marich

First look pass the stars[ rating], This was because of your grammar [ and look pass this to for I am a brother with issues of grammar & spelling to]. But I had help from other poets on the site. And don't think it's a brotherhood that's propitiates or motivated me to comment on your poem. I will not cheat you . I write to you ,because of the contents of your poem. I love it, I think the structure of you poem gives the reader. A beginning ,a middle , a ending. Always remember this . But never cheat on your poetry [ read it over out loud, check your spelling , check the flow] .And you will see for yourself what you need. I will read more of your poetry Press