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Dream
I dream of a day when we can truly understand one another
Of a world greater in every way than the one we live in today
Then I wake up to a world laid waste due to destruction caused by none other than mankind
I weep bitterly for this world
My tears escape to the shelter of ill stricken soils of a desolated and dead earth
Then I realize I am still dreaming because
Life springs forth from an utterly deceased, crusted shell of what used to be called “earth”
And sprouts,
And blooms,
And blossoms into happiness
And pollinates this lifeless rock that had once been consumed by hatred
WILL WE CONTINUE DOWN THIS PATH OF DESTRUCTION!
How long will we foolishly,
Naively,
Take for granted all that we’ve been blessed with
These thoughts race through my head
And then I wake up
It’s a beautiful day outside
The sun’s never shined so bright
The birds singing their melodies,
Bee’s buzzing in my ear,
And the wind’s there too
Blanketing me from the sun’s rays with its anesthetizing caress
I step out closer to the edge of my balcony to soak in the awesomeness of it all
In the midst of exhaling the balcony gives away
I plummet seven stories to a most certain death
My life flashes before my eyes
I cry out for help
Useless I know but a natural reaction
It’s only natural we cry out for a savior when in harm’s way
"I guess this is it"
I think as I fall
But wait I am screaming?!
and yet nothing is coming out?!
..........
....Sigh of relief...
….I'm still dreaming......
And then I fly away for the very first time
Critiques
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Hi
marich7
16 years 8 months ago
i happy you enjoyed it and
Seren
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Marich
marich7
16 years 8 months ago
thx jayne
marich7
16 years 8 months ago
life's a mystery ; )