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Lepadah
Member since March 29, 2009
Member for 17 years, 2 months
Lost in Summer
The smell after removing soak sweat panties
cock before the room of only two eyes
her full summery incense
beads along the small platform breast
dewdrops freeing the hole
legs apart slow shaking
vintage Bebop
flip flop two cheeks
fanning summers heated tushy
stay . . . manifest
upon request
descriptive thorough blue note
on back of signature jacket of Bud Powell
her summery scent now pronounce
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by tangle whips of humid air
from an open window low puffing voile
cast an usual aphrodisiac
quest hold of chance
sniffing under parted limbs
drinking warm drops
tender licks salt pubic feeler
spontaneously enthrall within her walls
of summer.
© 2012 Lepadah
Lepadah’s timeline
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28 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
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5 years of membership
- August 2012
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13 MonReceived a critique
on Lost in Summer from @judyanne
"with great descriptive sadly, not my cup of tea... but i appreciate anyone who can write this genre love judy xxx" -
12 SunReceived a critique
on Lost in Summer from @Ian.T
"If we can kill people and have Vampires strolling around, I am sure this is just another facet that many will be scared to comment on, But to me it might jog a few memories lol, Not sure what else to say, Yours Sparrow" - July 2012
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05 ThuReceived a critique
on The Blood and Guts from @Ian.T
"This to me, as looking from the reader who has scoured many a word dropped from quill or pen finds a complication.. Your words are phrased as if from Japanese talking English where there are bits cut off and expression…" - June 2012
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07 ThuReceived a critique
on Mon Frere Blasé (Spoken Word) from @weirdelf
"tell her to her face, not on a poetry site." -
06 WedPosted a poem
Mon Frere Blasé (Spoken Word)
"Mon Frere Blasé (Spoken Word) performed @Poetry Project (A performance piece" - May 2012
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26 SatReceived a critique
on He sings to me from @Dalton
"Its certainly a nice piece of poetry and had great music to it. Like listening to a beautiful sax solo in the middle of an experimental jazz piece before veering off into the abstract again. Like John Coltrane in its lo…" -
24 ThuReceived a critique
on He sings to me from @Dalton
"A few too many big words here that swallow up any room for imagery I think. This makes the piece a little abstruse. Your a talented poet as I've seen from your other pieces posted here I just think you should maybe not…" -
23 Wed
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15 TueReceived a critique
on The Sabbath (Jewel & Main) Spoken Word w/ Strings Sinatra's Good Life from @Dalton
"A Jazz poem I think. Beautiful and flowed like music. Maybe you could write a poem for John Coltrane I love his music. I'll look out for your poems in future. No corrections just a joy to read. John" -
15 TueNew follower
@Dalton
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15 TuePosted a poem
The Sabbath (Jewel & Main) Spoken Word w/ Strings Sinatra's Good Life
"The sun burn down into the resting arms of night" - April 2012
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27 FriReceived a critique
on Sister To Anais Nin from @Roscoe Lane
"A lovely languid stroll through words. Love it. Regards Roscoe..." -
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- March 2012
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21 Wed
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12 MonCritiqued
"Shining As Diamonds" by @Eduardo Cruz
"Finally found the time to check out some of your work. I really enjoyed this poem it reminded me of Quincy Troupe. I love the imagery . . . "glass, diamonds and a starry night." Are you familiar with comrade revolutiona…" -
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- July 2010
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09 FriCritiqued
"The Test Of Aphrodite" by @Race_9togo
"Hello Jim, Once again thanks for the raw truth and critique. This was a lovely poem and a great read. Peace Lepadah" -
02 FriCritiqued
"1000 Miles From Home" by @Morgana Tragic Proprietress
"I love this. I can so relate to the free spirit going somewhere so far away you forget. I travel on weekends to the mid west and love every second. Very nice. Peace 1 lepadah" - May 2010
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15 SatHighest posting month
May 2010 — 11 poems
- March 2010
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28 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2009
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- April 2009
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13 MonCritiqued
"Drum Circle" by @KambateSpike
"I honestly enjoyed this piece. Loved this "pomegranate seeds flowering in my grin." Great read. Peace lep" -
13 MonFirst critique offered
on "Drum Circle" by @KambateSpike
- March 2009
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29 SunFirst publication
Falling
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28 SatJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Member of NWU/UAW Local 1981/AFL-CIO, Member of The Poetry Project.
Published Author
About the author Lepadah
Words. Universally expanding outward beyond known possibilities. Spatial sporadic coagulations forming paratactic fragments. A collective archetypal inheritance expounds in the form of connected notions.
An equal expansion within. Unconscious forces seeking wholeness—the mystery of soul. Waves of resonance vibrate inward where emphasis and essence and imagination infinitely flow.
An artist’s self-sculpted personified effigy—words—shape into a finely contoured poet. Congregating episteme, a curious questioning method of elenchus seeks resolutions, just as the tightrope walker balances on the high wire sensually straddling calm and chaos, between truth and belief, encompassing reality and illusion…
Between the lines, a marinating alphabet soup of thought. Provoking pieces of nourishment, a literary tarantula translates. Spoken and unspoken images merge into discovery of repertoire as an ensemble waits in anticipation of dramatic performance, in other words, performance poetry, per se.
In lyrical soliloquy, a presentation of balanced, heart-felt harmony—prose and poetry—in other words…Le Per se.
Location: New York
Rumi
Gil Scott Heron
Felipe Luciano
Walt Whitman
Ginsberg
Kerouac
Neruda
Walker
Troupe
James Baldwin etc . . .list endless
Recent Work
Traveler
Sweet Screams
Summary (The Weekend)
Dream Sinsemilla
Precious Pebbles
Pittsburgh weekend
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