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Dream Sinsemilla

beyond a great hill down into a mossy quagmire you descend before the glow of moon before twilight the still deafening fireball ablaze a gaze even though I need sleep I watch under a blanket an amorphous revolutionize the phoenix parousia i come crawling out onto you shelter shoulders affix to sides to accommodate prepare to be envelop your wings spread thin I bow blushing a roaring furnace inside together eternal we rise we fly burst into a trillion colors in the sky our exorcism in sun eye away from the mossy beginnings embedded in my skin gold flicks told to shine you shall return to sunburn my being again © 2010 Lepadah
— Lepadah, Jun 02, 2010

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Country/Region: New York

Favorite Poets: Rumi, Gil Scott Heron, Felipe Luciano, Walt Whitman, Ginsberg, Kerouac, Neruda, Walker, Troupe, James Baldwin etc . . .list endless

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 11 months ago

Hello

I must admit I had to look up a few words within your poem (which is good for me) In this line: our exorcism in sun eye I think it would read better as sun's eye. My favorite lines are: prepare to be envelop your wings spread thin I bow blushing a roaring furnace inside together eternal we rise we fly burst into a trillion colors in the sky Always, Cat
Lepadah

Lepadah

15 years 11 months ago

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Always thank you for the suggestion and read. Greatly appreciated. Peace 1 always lepadah