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Juin Deveraux
Member since July 20, 2009
Member for 16 years, 10 months
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Stubborn Heart
Sometimes when my stubborn heart gets a little blue
I take her away from everything about you
I pour her a drink and take her in my arms
where her tears can roll free, away from judgement or harm
Juin Deveraux’s timeline
- July 2024
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19 FriAnniversary
15 years of membership
- July 2019
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19 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- July 2014
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19 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2011
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18 WedReceived a critique
on Stream of Unconsciousness from @Kailashana2
"I think the poem would work as is with a connecting last line, Juin. such as: but I'm me and that's about it. or but I'm the star of my show, so I'll shine. you see where I'm heading? ~A p.s. The title, *Stream of Uncon…" -
18 WedReceived a critique
on Stream of Unconsciousness from @Race_9togo
"I enjoyed the feel of this poem, it has an anger and desperation that I like. In general I like the pace and flow of it as well. Where this poem falls short is imo in it's repetition of hurt, which becomes stale very qu…" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on Stream of Unconsciousness from @CCfire
"It's often hard to rant in a poem, a stream of conscious thought can come out sounding childish sometimes and petulant and some of this sadly does that. The thought of it and premise is good but the language and the ove…" -
17 TueReceived a critique
on Stream of Unconsciousness from @magics02
"Every line starts with I but the one line Why can't I turn this around? You can turn this around and make this stand out better with some work. I realize this is first person and you even state I seems a little selfish…" - January 2011
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26 WedReceived a critique
on Stubborn Heart from @scribbler
"I think this is your 1st posting here.Welcome to the site.I always marvel at the way some writers can pack so much into so few words.Looking forward to more of your writing.............scribbler" -
26 WedReceived a critique
on Stubborn Heart from @mand
"I like this clever poem. I love the third line - I think I'll do that for my heart, sounds like good therapy. Excellent Love Mand xxxxxx" -
26 Wed
- July 2010
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19 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- May 2010
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29 SatReceived a critique
on It's me from @Taylor Delaware
"Someone told me once that the beauty of writing about pain is in the revealing of your emotion to others. Love it :) T." - March 2010
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13 SatReceived a critique
on The kiss that never was... from @panaella
"How lovely is that?...platonic love in it's purest form. Delicious write. Ells x" -
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- February 2010
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12 FriCritiqued
"Something...." by @Taylor Delaware
"I have to go back to my favorites every once and a while and this is easily my top 5! my favorite two lines... "Hold you, until you melt into my pores." and "I sometimes close my eyes and imagine The soft “clink” of uns…" - January 2010
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31 Sun
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29 Fri
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27 Wed
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04 MonCritiqued
"Looking For New Fires To Start" by @Taylor Delaware
"I'm inspired to burn this world down and dance naked in the ashes! Bravo" -
04 MonFirst critique offered
on "Looking For New Fires To Start" by @Taylor Delaware
- November 2009
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06 Fri
- July 2009
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20 MonFirst publication
The first dance
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20 Mon
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19 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Location: USA
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Stubborn Heart
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The kiss that never was...
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It's me
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Vengeance
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Mine
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Muse
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The first dance
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