Juin Deveraux

Member since July 20, 2009

Member for 16 years, 10 months

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Stubborn Heart

Posted Jan 26, 2011 · 4 lines · 3 critiques

Sometimes when my stubborn heart gets a little blue
I take her away from everything about you
I pour her a drink and take her in my arms
where her tears can roll free, away from judgement or harm

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July 2024
19 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2019
19 Fri

Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2014
19 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
May 2011
18 Wed

Received a critique
on Stream of Unconsciousness from @Kailashana2
"I think the poem would work as is with a connecting last line, Juin. such as: but I'm me and that's about it. or but I'm the star of my show, so I'll shine. you see where I'm heading? ~A p.s. The title, *Stream of Uncon…"
18 Wed

Received a critique
on Stream of Unconsciousness from @Race_9togo
"I enjoyed the feel of this poem, it has an anger and desperation that I like. In general I like the pace and flow of it as well. Where this poem falls short is imo in it's repetition of hurt, which becomes stale very qu…"
17 Tue

Received a critique
on Stream of Unconsciousness from @CCfire
"It's often hard to rant in a poem, a stream of conscious thought can come out sounding childish sometimes and petulant and some of this sadly does that. The thought of it and premise is good but the language and the ove…"
January 2011
26 Wed

Posted a poem
Stubborn Heart
"Sometimes when my stubborn heart gets a little blue"
Open thread 4 lines
July 2010
19 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
March 2010
13 Sat

Posted a poem
The kiss that never was...
" A song of now reminded me a of time that was"
Open thread 7 lines
January 2010
31 Sun

Posted a poem
It's me
"I'm the one who hasn't kept my side of the bargain"
Open thread 22 lines
04 Mon

First critique offered
on "Looking For New Fires To Start" by @Taylor Delaware
July 2009
20 Mon

First publication
The first dance
19 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.