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Juin Deveraux
Juin Deveraux
Jan 27, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Mine

 
You inspired me 
when I hoped to inspire you
You rebuilt me using my own parts
You put the hope back in my heart

I desired your mind
Craved your words
Drank your presence
and I'm still not full

I need more 
I want more
Damnit!
I'm taking it all

I'm no longer afraid of the dark
I want to take this chance 
For you,
I'm ready to fall



— Juin Deveraux, Jan 27, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Juin

I dont know if I have read anything of yours before(dont think I have) ... but this poem is brilliant ... it reminds me of something and I cannot put my finger on it(another poem) ... it will come to me ... anyway brilliant work I will be looking out for more from your pen this ?? caught my attention and held it .. not something thats easy to do well done kind regards Jayne-Chloe
UA

U K Atiyodi

16 years 4 months ago

Mine

Dear Juin, Now I know 'Brevity is the soul of wit' So many interpretations will make the poem thought provoking. I like it. UK
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

*I’m taking it all*

*I'm taking it all* Should be the motto of every poet. Well done! ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine